Thursday, April 13, 2006

those lines softened

the ending.
so it is.
ending.
and the contour of the naked flesh
closing
in orbit
actually
fading indescribable
as if that were
a word
ever used
in poesy. i made the magistrate,
the stars,
the overwhelming
day.

you stayed.

pretended the worthless.
imagined the future.
you stayed.
imagining.
the ROCKS

1 Comments:

Blogger Randy Billings said...

,,,, GIVING THE POEM THE FORM THE POEM DEMANDS. "I MADE THE MAGISTRATE,/THE STARS,/THE OVERWHELMING DAY.// YOU STAYED.// PRETENDED THE WORTHLESS./ IMAGINED THE FUTURE." VERY EFFECTIVE USE OF VARIATION OF LINE LENGTH, SONG AND METER. AGAIN, NICE FORM ,,,,

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